I remember the day
when for first time I rock the mic,
I was fright like liltlle kid learn to drive bike.
now I ' m 17 years old
green like weed and cold like sword
but inside me there is a fire
making every lier to die
HA
to morrow if I don't woke up
will the sun doesn't rize up
the worl can be without me
and that's fucked up
no body cares for me
I'm filling like locked up.
I'm filling like in jail
should I escape
and rape a female.
or to be a good prisioner
and die like strait male
I never gonna be a milioner
my hair start to folling of
shooting with the lyrics like a Dino Zof - the ball
every assholle when drink alchohole
sream like he had scored a goal
but in fact is a man small

Го про4итав, интересен е, ама не е ништо посебно.Добро е што е на англиски.( Според мене ).Друго немаш многу рими, малку се..

Ова ти е глупо: " the worl can be without me " ( Барем јас не го разбрав..)
Би требало да зна4и светот можи и без мене, ама сепак...

You've got a LOT grammatical mistakes which you really should correct.

OK! ali sepak ne sum ekspert za angliski dz ima mnogu gramaticki greski
a za toa the world can be without me - and thats fucked up
znaci svetot moze da bide i bez mene i toa e zaebano , sto znaci deka vsusnost sum samo edna mala prasinka vo svetot i ne bi bilo za nego steta ako mene me nema na nego.

Nothin special I'm down with Big E.

Еј знајш англиски

abe so mu fali.jas mislam deka se e ok barem po moe.

ti sine taka mislis oti ne razbiras angliski
a ti profesore mozi ne znaes dali znam ili ne

Nice one, still, needs to be rearranged. Your grammar needs a refreshment but keep goin'. Respect.

Tha TeaCheR WitH Her OldFashioN Advises ... ( Го згрешив ? Ај ти е гајле )